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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:06 pm | |
| I think the middle of the second stanza is "To ease the loss of youth & the many years I've saved you."
I'm not sure about "saved", but that's what I'm seeing.
Also, the missing word in the next line could possibly be "pages"...maybe?
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JimmyB The Navesink Banks
Posts : 5619 Join date : 2010-10-27 Age : 32 Location : Pennsylvania-The land of the Three Rivers.
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:09 pm | |
| I think I can read ABOUT after the Turn it up
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Debonair First Among Equals
Posts : 4161 Join date : 2011-08-31 Age : 32 Location : New Jersey
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:10 pm | |
| - IrishNameAndAnInjury wrote:
- I think the middle of the second stanza is "To ease the loss of youth & the many years I've saved you."
I'm not sure about "saved", but that's what I'm seeing.
Also, the missing word in the next line could possible be "pages"...maybe? Its a combination of yours and mine now that i look at it. "To ease the loss of youth & the many years I've loved you." | |
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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:13 pm | |
| - Debonair wrote:
- IrishNameAndAnInjury wrote:
- I think the middle of the second stanza is "To ease the loss of youth & the many years I've saved you."
I'm not sure about "saved", but that's what I'm seeing.
Also, the missing word in the next line could possible be "pages"...maybe? Its a combination of yours and mine now that i look at it.
"To ease the loss of youth & the many years I've loved you." Team work! I really like that line. In fact, I love it. | |
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Christophe The '59 Sound
Posts : 1461 Join date : 2010-04-21 Age : 33 Location : England
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:14 pm | |
| and did you _ just drive without a word inbetween I can understand, you need a minute to breathe | |
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Debonair First Among Equals
Posts : 4161 Join date : 2011-08-31 Age : 32 Location : New Jersey
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:16 pm | |
| - Christophe wrote:
- and did you _ just drive without a word inbetween
I can understand, you need a minute to breathe Nice job, adding now | |
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Christophe The '59 Sound
Posts : 1461 Join date : 2010-04-21 Age : 33 Location : England
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:17 pm | |
| - Debonair wrote:
- Christophe wrote:
- and did you _ just drive without a word inbetween
I can understand, you need a minute to breathe Nice job, adding now It's coming together like a jigsaw
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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:21 pm | |
| Nice work, Christophe! I couldn't figure out "inbetween" at all! | |
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Christophe The '59 Sound
Posts : 1461 Join date : 2010-04-21 Age : 33 Location : England
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:23 pm | |
| - IrishNameAndAnInjury wrote:
- Nice work, Christophe! I couldn't figure out "inbetween" at all!
Thanks Shannon I didn't notice it at first and then it just kind of sprang out at me. | |
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Debonair First Among Equals
Posts : 4161 Join date : 2011-08-31 Age : 32 Location : New Jersey
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:27 pm | |
| i sorta want to go brag to Brian that we are figuring this out | |
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Christophe The '59 Sound
Posts : 1461 Join date : 2010-04-21 Age : 33 Location : England
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:29 pm | |
| 'There's nothing like another soul/mind that's been cut up the same'
That one is tricky I think it is either soul or mind though. | |
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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:32 pm | |
| - Christophe wrote:
- 'There's nothing like another soul/mind that's been cut up the same'
That one is tricky I think it is either soul or mind though. Yes! I think you got it! "There's nothing like another soul that's been cut up the same". That looks right. That line kind of kills me, in a good way. | |
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Debonair First Among Equals
Posts : 4161 Join date : 2011-08-31 Age : 32 Location : New Jersey
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:33 pm | |
| - Christophe wrote:
- 'There's nothing like another soul/mind that's been cut up the same'
That one is tricky I think it is either soul or mind though. im seeing soul? also i added the updates to the initial post, and ill edit them as we discover more. | |
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Christophe The '59 Sound
Posts : 1461 Join date : 2010-04-21 Age : 33 Location : England
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:35 pm | |
| 'pages plead forgiven'
I think it could be soul yes. | |
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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:38 pm | |
| I don't know how much sense it makes, but on the last line of the second stanza, I keep seeing " Pages plead forgiven, every word handwritten." Edit: whoops, sorry Christophe, I didn't see that you had just posted that. | |
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Christophe The '59 Sound
Posts : 1461 Join date : 2010-04-21 Age : 33 Location : England
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:40 pm | |
| - IrishNameAndAnInjury wrote:
- I don't know how much sense it makes, but on the last line of the second stanza, I keep seeing "Pages plead forgiven, every word handwritten."
Edit: whoops, sorry Christophe, I didn't see that you had just posted that. Haha never mind. Great minds think alike Shannon Man I feel like Sherlock Homes right now! | |
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Debonair First Among Equals
Posts : 4161 Join date : 2011-08-31 Age : 32 Location : New Jersey
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:42 pm | |
| - Christophe wrote:
- 'pages plead forgiven'
I think it could be soul yes. yes i think your right about the pages part now bea wrote it as "__ plead forgiven, every word handwritten" but do you suppose that the "pages plead forgiven" comes after actually, and is another line? im not sure if the line before "every word is handwritten" is crossed out and is being replaced with "pages plead forgiven" or not. maybe its suppose to be "___ every word handwritten _ pages plead forgiven" | |
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Christophe The '59 Sound
Posts : 1461 Join date : 2010-04-21 Age : 33 Location : England
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:44 pm | |
| I think the orginal line is crossed out so it is supposed to go:
'Pages plead forgiven, every word handwritten.'
I think so it's hard to tell. It sounds better like that. Every word handwritten sounds more final than pages plead forgiven so to me it makes sense to be the last line in that section. | |
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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:48 pm | |
| - Christophe wrote:
- I think the orginal line is crossed out so it is supposed to go:
'Pages plead forgiven, every word handwritten.'
I think so it's hard to tell. It sounds better like that. Every word handwritten sounds more final than pages plead forgiven so to me it makes sense to be the last line in that section. I agree with this. | |
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Debonair First Among Equals
Posts : 4161 Join date : 2011-08-31 Age : 32 Location : New Jersey
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:48 pm | |
| i agree, but i think there is something written before the "pages plead forgiven" its kind of mushed in there.
it looks like "of the" or - " on the" or even just - " of "
do you see it?
edit : it might be "after" actually | |
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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Tue Apr 24, 2012 10:17 pm | |
| ^I think that might actually be &... I'm not positive about that though. Can you tell what is written in the margin of the page next to that stanza? | |
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Bea The Navesink Banks
Posts : 1578 Join date : 2010-05-26 Age : 32 Location : Luxembourg / Spain
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:25 am | |
| this waiting has been driving us insane and i think it's safe to say we've officially gone crazy | |
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IrishNameAndAnInjury The Navesink Banks
Posts : 13514 Join date : 2011-09-16 Age : 41 Location : Spokane Valley, WA
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Debonair First Among Equals
Posts : 4161 Join date : 2011-08-31 Age : 32 Location : New Jersey
| Subject: Re: transcribe the Handwritten lyrics (photo) Thu Jun 07, 2012 9:27 pm | |
| pull it out, turn it up, whats your favorite song? thats mine, ive been crying to it since i was young. i know there's someone out there feeling just like i feel i know they're waiting up, i know they're waiting to hear and i've been holding my breath, ive been holding my breath for too many years to count...
& we waited for sirens that never come and we only write by the moon, every word handwritten and to ease the loss of youth and how many years I've missed you Pages plead forgiveness, every word handwritten.
let it out, let me in, take a hold of my hand There's nothing like another soul that's been cut up the same and did you wanna just drive without a word inbetween I can understand, you need a minute to breathe and to sow up the seams after all this defeat...
being in the dark, I cherish the moonlight... I am in love with the way you're in love with the night and it travels from heart to limb to pen...
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