simo The Navesink Banks
Posts : 1983 Join date : 2009-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Columbia, Missouri
| Subject: Simo's music Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:33 pm | |
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simo The Navesink Banks
Posts : 1983 Join date : 2009-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Columbia, Missouri
| Subject: Re: Simo's music Wed May 05, 2010 11:16 pm | |
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loazis The '59 Sound
Posts : 1230 Join date : 2010-01-24 Age : 33 Location : On the flipside, Netherlands
| Subject: Re: Simo's music Thu May 06, 2010 7:12 am | |
| Not bad.
After one listen to every 'track' in the list I can say I like the guitarwork, albeit a bit sloppy at some points. I like the little hammer-on/pull-off parts.
Can't really say much about the lyrics, I always have trouble actually hearing what's being said/sung the first listen, seems like I'm more focused on the instruments.
Vocally, it's not that strong, nor terrible. It seems to me that you're a bit off at some points, especially on the end of sentences/lines. It sounds like you drop a bit at those points. There are also moments in which it looks like you have too many words/syllables to actually fit in with the music =P
I'm not experienced with writing music or anything, I have made attempts but never got further than a bunch of chords and a chorus here and there, so I'm just saying what came up at first listen. It's better than anything I've ever managed to write down I'd say! Keep it up =)
Out of interest, what did you use to record (and edit for that matter)? | |
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simo The Navesink Banks
Posts : 1983 Join date : 2009-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Columbia, Missouri
| Subject: Re: Simo's music Thu May 06, 2010 10:42 pm | |
| Thanks, I appreciate you listening to me.
I used Garageband and a Blue Snowball mic for recording. I didn't do any editing on the tracks with vocals, but obviously some of the other ones I did since they have multiple instruments on it and all that.
I agree with you on the end of lines. I always notice it when I play back recordings, but it doesn't feel like I drop off when I'm actually singing it. It's just something I have to work on. | |
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loazis The '59 Sound
Posts : 1230 Join date : 2010-01-24 Age : 33 Location : On the flipside, Netherlands
| Subject: Re: Simo's music Fri May 07, 2010 9:37 am | |
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simo The Navesink Banks
Posts : 1983 Join date : 2009-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Columbia, Missouri
| Subject: Re: Simo's music Sun May 09, 2010 2:22 am | |
| I put up another song that I haven't quite figured out how to sing yet...some of the delivery isn't right, but I'm pretty happy with the guitar on it. It's a nice song to play outside on a beautiful day. | |
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