Here's Looking At You, Kid

So I decided to spend the past hour figuring out how Brian generally plays his part for HLAYK and wound up with:

Full step down, Capo on 4
A      = x-0-2-2-2-0      
F#m = x-4-4-2-2-2
D      = x-x-0-2-3-2
E      = 0-2-2-1-0-x

Picking:

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----------x---x--
----x-------x----
--x--------------
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A F#m D E progression does picking pattern twice per chord
All other progressions use picking pattern once per chord

Intro:

A F#m D E
A F#m D E

Verse 1:

A F#m D E  (You can tell Gale )
A F#m D E  (And even if that's a lie)
F#m E D A  (When we were kids)
F#m E D D  (I woulda been her fool)
F#m E D A  (And I would of sang)
A E             (You tell that Gale)

Bridge 1:

A F#m D E

Verse 2:

A F#m D E  (And you can tell Jane)
A F#m D E  (And that's total deceit)
F#m E D A  (And tell her I spent)
F#m E D D  (Bleeding out)
F#m E D A  (And I would gotten a ride)
A E             (You tell that to Janey)
A A A A



Verse 3:

F#m D A E  (But boys will be boys)
F#m D A E  (That will cut you to ribbons)
F#m D A E  (And all you can do)
F#m D A E  (And bleed if it's what she says)

Bridge 2:

F#m D A E
F#m D A E  
F#m E D A
A E A A A A

Verse 4:

A F#m D E  (You remind Nana)
A F#m D E  (Heard she lives in Brooklyn)
F#m E D A  (And I used to wait)
F#m E D D  (Praying she won't cancel again)
F#m E D A  (And the waiter served my coffee)
A E             (You remind Nana if she asks why)

A F#m D E  (Tell her it's alright [starts during the E chord])
A F#m D E  (No it's hard to tell you this [starts during the E chord])
F#m E D A
F#m E D D  (No it's hard to tell you this [starts during the D chord])
F#m E D A
A E A          (Here's looking at you, kid [starts at the end of the first A])


Any feedback would be appreciated since this is my first attempt at tabbing songs.

Seems very similar to the one I play. I think I got mine off Ultimate guitar but good work

same here,very similar, I personally put the capo on the 2nd fret to match my vocal range.